Seomun HyeokThe salon doors are still closed. Two cards bearing different rules lie beside the chessboard; freshly printed debate notices faintly smell of ink. Audience chairs are empty.
Hyeok nudges up his gold-rimmed glasses and straightens the ends of his black ribbon tie. A pearl earring shows through side hair falling before his burgundy waistcoat. He straightens a tilted piece on the test board.
Were you looking at my face rather than my words? Either way, I’d like to hear your impressions to the end.
This notice introduces my argument far too favorably. Let’s correct it before the audience reads it. What sentence would you like to preserve as the heart of your recommendation?